Heh. I can see the clicks on Teaspoon (which reminds me, where is my chapter?!?) - I average about one review per 200 hits. Can't figure out how to put a counter on individual posts here on LJ, though. I imagine it'd be a similar ratio of reviews per hit number as Teaspoon. If anyone knows how to do this, let me know, because now I'm curious.
That scene will be tricky - we've got Melina at the height of her power and a post-extraction, nekkid Ten who has had 3 doses of soporific and just wants to sleep (and cuddle, 'cause Ten would be a cuddler). Melina would not only be cleaning him up, she also does an initial tweak of the bond at that point plus some heavy telepathic stimulation and suggestion that would continue to increase as his subconscious mind processes it after she leaves - which leads to the initial relations with Rose, as Lyra finds that Ten is in distress after Melina leaves him and fetches Rose to help. And that sentence (and thought process spewed on screen) totally got away from me, yes. Hrm. And I don't have time for a proper flake-out on the couch! *flails*
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That scene will be tricky - we've got Melina at the height of her power and a post-extraction, nekkid Ten who has had 3 doses of soporific and just wants to sleep (and cuddle, 'cause Ten would be a cuddler). Melina would not only be cleaning him up, she also does an initial tweak of the bond at that point plus some heavy telepathic stimulation and suggestion that would continue to increase as his subconscious mind processes it after she leaves - which leads to the initial relations with Rose, as Lyra finds that Ten is in distress after Melina leaves him and fetches Rose to help. And that sentence (and thought process spewed on screen) totally got away from me, yes. Hrm. And I don't have time for a proper flake-out on the couch! *flails*