Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. This is like the most extended foreplay ever, this story. And I'm loving every second. :-)

I'm glad to see both of them just diving in to this--like everything else they do--they're going full steam ahead. And you portray what's happening so vividly; I can feel what Rose is feeling, and what she's thinking makes complete sense to me.

And, of course, incredibly hot. Hoo boy. [fans herself]

Thank you!