THANTH - Omake

[mtemplar_fic]

And the promised Omake - not to be considered part of this story (at least not yet)! This is very painfully unbetaed, all mistakes are mine. For principia_coh - Happy Early Birthday!



The Doctor was right where she wanted him - aroused, naked and most importantly, in her bed. Rose scooted forward between his legs, finding his shy inexperience an incredible turn-on. "I'm going to touch you now," she warned him, and then she did so, cupping his balls and listening with satisfaction to his sharp intake of breath. His cock sprang to full attention almost instantaneously and she breathed across the tip, glancing up at him when she heard his half-strangled groan.

The Doctor's eyes were as big as saucers. Rose quirked an eyebrow and his eyes darted to hers.

"Is this ok?" she asked in the sultriest voice she could manage.

The Doctor seemed stricken silent, so Rose continued. Keeping her eyes trained on his face, she lowered her head to give his cock a slow, warm, wet sweep of her tongue, moving all the way from the base to the tip. The Doctor's eyebrows arched up into his hairline and he made a keening breathless sound that made her own desire rise exponentially. The look he gave her was one of total astonishment.

Rose grinned, and returned her attention to his cock. Taking his erection into his mouth, she circled her tongue around him, probing the slit at the tip before pressing him to the roof of her mouth and sucking gently.

Much to Rose's satisfaction, the Doctor flailed wildly in the bedding, almost getting away from her and she grabbed onto his hips to hold him just there.

"Rose, what're you... oh. Oh! OH!!!"

Rose continued to move in slow bobs, her hands sliding over the Doctor's thighs and pressing them down. His hands found the back of her head, his fingers clutching there for a moment before tangling in her blonde tresses. She amused herself listening to his strangled pleas and cries in his melodious native language.

The Doctor came with a shout, jerking hard and gasping for air. Rose felt the rush of golden energy, filling her with warmth and bright pleasure. She continued to move on him for a few moments after he had come until she was sure he was well and thoroughly spent.

She released his cock with a wet popping noise and moved up his shuddering body, settling him comfortably in the mass of pillows on the bed and pulling up the downy comforter. He was still panting and she leaned in to kiss him, frowning when he abruptly turned his head to the side.

"What's wrong?" Rose asked, concerned.

"Ah - I don't mean to be rude, but maybe you should gargle or something?" the Doctor said, risking a glance at Rose's shocked face.

Rose was not amused.

"Ow! What was that for?"

Comments

[platypus]

Ha! Iz canon.

(And are you going to stop protesting that you have trouble writing smut now? Hmm?)

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Iz so nut canon! *waits patiently for the nitpick - ha!*

And no - I stand firmly by my statement that I cannot write decent smut to save my own life! So there!

[butterflyborn.livejournal.com]

Um, sorry to disagree, but you have some of the most well written, creatively and sensually descriptive smut I have read. Not that I am a connoisseur, LOL, but with your stories I get caught up in the story, the whole scene, not jarred out of it by the same words every other sentence. As a rule I don't do smut. I do your smut. *grin*

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

*blushes* That is terribly kind of you to say - thank you! It took me absolutely forever to write the last two chapters, while the little omake here seemed to write itself. Maybe it gets easier with practice, I dunno.

And for a non-connoisseur, that is quite the icon you have there. Can't. Stop. Staring....

[principia-coh.livejournal.com]

The Doctor was right where she wanted him - aroused, naked and most importantly, in her bed. Rose scooted forward between his legs, finding his shy inexperience an incredible turn-on.

A glimpse of what he's really like when he's not all doped up? Hee!

She amused herself listening to his strangled pleas and cries in his melodious native language.

Not something one can exactly picture a Time Lady or one of the Sisters (even Sister Thang) doing for their man.

"Ah - I don't mean to be rude, but maybe you should gargle or something?"

He'd best be glad she swallowed first, that's all I'm gonna say on that subject! XD

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

A glimpse of what he's really like when he's not all doped up? Hee!

Not necessarily - this is an Omake! And a silly one at that!

Not something one can exactly picture a Time Lady or one of the Sisters (even Sister Thang) doing for their man.

*laughs* That would not be a subject taught at the Academy, no. 'Sister Thang'? Would that be Melina?

[principia-coh.livejournal.com]

Not necessarily - this is an Omake! And a silly one at that!

I think what they should've done last year instead of The Infinite Quest was a series of omake to air at the end of each episode.

'Sister Thang'? Would that be Melina?

Yes, yes it would.

[rebelsaint.livejournal.com]

He may not mean to be rude, but he certainly is.

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Oh yes - hence the slap!

[bluevolvic.livejournal.com]

Great Omake! :D

lmao at the ending

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Thank you!!!

[huggabledog.livejournal.com]

Thank you for pointing me here. That was so cute, and I loved the ending. Chuckle. You say you don't do smut well? You can't believe that! You do A1 class smut, I promise.

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Ha! It's akin to pulling teeth for me. Thank you for being so kind! *grins*

[lucyd3.livejournal.com]

I don't know what an Omake is (I'm really confused about LiveJournal in general) but this is a lovely little piece of smut!

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Thank you! An omake is a mostly Japanese concept, of adding a silly extra cartoon at the end of a manga. This follows the same concept, except this is a silly ficlet!

[scilera.livejournal.com]

Smutty AND funny!

Epic win on almost a Baby!TARDIS level! ;D

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

That would be my version of an omake, yes.

And thanks! :P

[catyuy.livejournal.com]

Oh Doctor, there are certain things you don't say to a girl after she's done THAT for you. Good job.

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Rude and not ginger - yes. *grins*

[catyuy.livejournal.com]

Rude, not ginger and looking for a slap.

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

And he got what he deserved!

[catyuy.livejournal.com]

He should hope that neither Jack or Jackie ever hear about this event.

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Ha! I don't think Rose would share this information.

[roxyk630.livejournal.com]

*GLEEEEEEEEEEEE* HOW DO I MISS THESE!? SERIOUSLY!?

HEHEHEHE "You have a bit of...erm."

Luckily, if she wanted to do that in public... it... might look like body glitter? >>;

This is cute, funny, and HOT. I'll be in my bunk...

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

What, you missed this one? Really?

Luckily, if she wanted to do that in public... it... might look like body glitter?

Oooh, that's true. That could be another omake right there. Rose is getting dolled up for a party and runs out of body glitter. Shops are closed - what's a girl to do? *snerk*

[principia-coh.livejournal.com]

Or Ten sees her all dolled up to go out to a party, and seeing her in the body glitter gives him Certain Ideas.

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Ten: Oh, Rose... you, erm... missed a spot. Just there. *palms container of body glitter*

[roxyk630.livejournal.com]

EHEHEHEHE I REQUEST THIS CRACK. :D

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

*laughs* When's your birthday?

[roxyk630.livejournal.com]

XD; June 30th?

[mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com]

Oh good - I've got some time! *grins*

[roxyk630.livejournal.com]

*GLEE*