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And the promised Omake - not to be considered part of this story (at least not yet)! This is very painfully unbetaed, all mistakes are mine. For [livejournal.com profile] principia_coh - Happy Early Birthday!



The Doctor was right where she wanted him - aroused, naked and most importantly, in her bed. Rose scooted forward between his legs, finding his shy inexperience an incredible turn-on. "I'm going to touch you now," she warned him, and then she did so, cupping his balls and listening with satisfaction to his sharp intake of breath. His cock sprang to full attention almost instantaneously and she breathed across the tip, glancing up at him when she heard his half-strangled groan.

The Doctor's eyes were as big as saucers. Rose quirked an eyebrow and his eyes darted to hers.

"Is this ok?" she asked in the sultriest voice she could manage.

The Doctor seemed stricken silent, so Rose continued. Keeping her eyes trained on his face, she lowered her head to give his cock a slow, warm, wet sweep of her tongue, moving all the way from the base to the tip. The Doctor's eyebrows arched up into his hairline and he made a keening breathless sound that made her own desire rise exponentially. The look he gave her was one of total astonishment.

Rose grinned, and returned her attention to his cock. Taking his erection into his mouth, she circled her tongue around him, probing the slit at the tip before pressing him to the roof of her mouth and sucking gently.

Much to Rose's satisfaction, the Doctor flailed wildly in the bedding, almost getting away from her and she grabbed onto his hips to hold him just there.

"Rose, what're you... oh. Oh! OH!!!"

Rose continued to move in slow bobs, her hands sliding over the Doctor's thighs and pressing them down. His hands found the back of her head, his fingers clutching there for a moment before tangling in her blonde tresses. She amused herself listening to his strangled pleas and cries in his melodious native language.

The Doctor came with a shout, jerking hard and gasping for air. Rose felt the rush of golden energy, filling her with warmth and bright pleasure. She continued to move on him for a few moments after he had come until she was sure he was well and thoroughly spent.

She released his cock with a wet popping noise and moved up his shuddering body, settling him comfortably in the mass of pillows on the bed and pulling up the downy comforter. He was still panting and she leaned in to kiss him, frowning when he abruptly turned his head to the side.

"What's wrong?" Rose asked, concerned.

"Ah - I don't mean to be rude, but maybe you should gargle or something?" the Doctor said, risking a glance at Rose's shocked face.

Rose was not amused.

"Ow! What was that for?"

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Date: 2009-02-01 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scilera.livejournal.com
Smutty AND funny!

Epic win on almost a Baby!TARDIS level! ;D

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Date: 2009-02-01 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mtemplar-fic.livejournal.com
That would be my version of an omake, yes.

And thanks! :P

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